tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-154189992011-10-06T11:27:51.159ZMy creative works - please review/comment onArchgirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13470218741397688556noreply@blogger.comBlogger41100tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15418999.post-1132011451049791852005-11-14T23:35:00.000Z2005-11-14T23:37:31.060Z

Yes its been quite some time since I last posted! The good news is though that I actually have something to post. Its not long but it was really hard for me because I don't do dialogue all that well. As usual all feedback welcome! Here goes...The wind whipped her hair up into a frenzy of dancing curls that lashed across her face. Carrie stared out at the vast expanse of treacherous sea before her

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Things are not going well with the writing. It was a while ago that I wrote that prologue and it was for something completely different. What it does mean is that I'm really out of practice and I haven't really put together any ideas for a new story.I have tried this week to write something but I'm not happy with it. I'm going to post it anyway as I've re-written this short bit so many times that

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For anyone who happens upon this random piece of writing, first let me say its not meant to be any good. I like to practice a bit of story telling now and then and this seemed the perfect way. This is all my own work and copyrighted as such.The other thing I want to say is that I will be putting draft bits as well as final pieces up and I would welcome comments. I've set up the comment thingy so

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Rain. Nothing but thick, heavy waves of rain lashed across her face. Even if the moon had been full tonight the trees would still have been swallowed up by this weather. The woman paused, listening out for any signs that she was being followed. There was nothing except the splashing of the rain and the rustle of the leaves in the wind. It was cold tonight, and combined with the rain she was

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